Thesis
From watching both "Sket" and "Sucker Punch", i can gauge some similarities between the ways that women are represented throughout both films, but the purpose for the way they are represented are different. I believe that women in "Sucker Punch" are made to appear masculine for the purpose of visual style, and to make the film more entertaining, although some times contradicting itself with more feminine aspects. Were as "Sket" represents its women as masculine for the purpose of story and character arcs.
Points
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Macro: Representation
Example: (Sucker Punch samurai scene)
Analysis: This scene is a good example of my point, as the fight scene is compiled of special effects and sword play to make the character "Baby doll" seem more masculine, but does still slip in some "up-skirt" shots.
Synthesis: comparing this to the bus fight scene from "Sket"; the scene does the complete opposite, it masculineises women to make their characters aggressive for a narrative purpose unlike "Sucker Punch".
2
Macro: Representation
Example: (Shop robbery scene)
Analysis: This scene shows Kay comiting a crime, a deed that is not usually assosiated with women, women are "normaly" looked apon as quite regal and should not be commiting crimes, a man would be.
Synthisis: Comparing this with the dragon scene from "Sucker Punch"; it shows "Baby doll" killing a drogon with a samurai sword, again is not a womenly thing to be doing, in a fairy tale-esk setting, usually it is men who are the ones slaying dragons in castle keeps.
3
Macro: Representaion
Example: (Highroller scene)
Analysis: Its at this point in the movie that "Baby doll" has lost all masculinity and is now dependent and under the guise of the high roller.
Synthisis: A somewhat simaler asspect apppers at the end of "Sket" were Kay has lost Danielle and is now relient on her father, this is a good comparison as the masculinity built on these characters through out the movie is turnt straight back again, abd they are now dependent on male characters instead.
Conclusion
The representation of masculinity in the women of "Sket" and "Sucker Punch" is used for different purpose. In Sucker Punch the women are masculinised for visual purposes, as you are ment to feel as if the women are being empowered so that they can conquer all the obstacles that they have to face. This can only be acquired by the characters becoming more masculine, but they are not necessarily for example Gun fights, sword play etc. "Sket" shares a similar concept of women having to be more like men to survive, but it is more for the actual narrative. All the fighting in "Sket" is necessary as the women are supposed to be shown as more powerful than men, but "Sucker Punch" rather than representing the masculinity of women it predominately uses visual style to create a spectacle.
Your conclusion has the detail and the content that one would expect to see exemplified in your main body points. These points require substantial detail to make any sense.
ReplyDeleteWhat roles do women normally have - action chicks not even mentioned? Male gaze?
Where are these basic ideas? Phonic symbols?
I am concerned as to the scenes you are comparing - why not compare the theft of the key scene in Suckerpunch - is killing a dragon a crime? Not sure this is suitable.
Also why has the objectification of the dance/fight scene been discussed - it was one of the significant points in your presentation but isn't featured anywhere here?
You will need to back all this up with detailed MICRO evidence, which currently I cannot work out why some massively important scenes have been excluded - why is the opening not featured, doesn't it set up the male dominated world she lives in - doesn't Sket do the same? What about the punishment at the end - the labotomy?
Think you need to think all this through and give it more time to take shape?
You do have 2 comparable films and have an understanding of the messgaes but are women supposed to be represented as 'regal?' What about stock characters in the genre? Have you noticed everything she is fighting is male? Or appeals to men?
What repurcussions does Sket deliver to the girls who fight back? Ending - messages?
Needs more detail in the main body points. I hope to see that in your draft along with more appropriate juxtaposed scenes. I suspect you need to spend more time thinking this through - you have the overall messages/conclusion but need to now justify it with the detail.
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ReplyDeleteYour mentor partner's essay plan.
Also doing rep of women - look at how she has applied theory and the quality of detail - aim for this
You should be working with her for support every week.